“with (or) in the profession of”
I have two questions.
- Should I use 'with the profession' or 'in the profession' in this text?
- Is this sentence gramatically correct?
Completed his education at the company-affiliated Basic Vocational School for working people WZE in Berlin with the profession of turner.
WZE - name of school
Top Answer/Comment:
Your first question is mystifying, so I will address your second one and see if you edit to clarify.
The second sentence could do with some punctuation for clarity. A better phrase than 'with the profession' would be 'qualifying as'. So:
Completed his education at the company-affiliated Basic Vocational School for working people, WZE, in Berlin, qualifying as a professional turner.
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